*Rose From a Thorn*
Many hardships and sufferings occur
Everything beautiful is just a big blurr
Pain pierces from a sharp cutting thorn
And All you can do is cry and mourn
Trials devour you, and there is no end
You feel like you have not a friend
All you can think about is searing pain
Forgetting God's powerful healing name
God watches you go through severity
He wants us to see his blessings with clarity
Call to him and he will make a way
Through the pitch black darkness of today
Out of the thorn will bloom a red rose
All of its wonderous beauty will be exposed
Maturity and love will blossom and grow
God's perfect will and purpose you'll know
What is a beautiful rose without a thorn?
For it makes the rose's beauty reborn
What is a life without trials to endure?
It will create a thankful heart so pure
What is a rose without thorns? What is a life without troubles? (what do you think?!)?
NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE!! everyone who says read my poem always sucks at poetry nothing ryhmes and they talk about nothing, but yours is perfect!! very good i've been writing poems since i was 16 i love it!! now i'm 27.
Reply:life without trouble is lame and useless
Reply:GOOD POEM!......BUT LIFE CAN'T BE WITHOUT TROUBLES.
Reply:SAFER
Reply:The truth is that trouble in life makes one stronger so that when you supposably resurrect from the grave at christ's second coming, you won't ever fall into sin....I think
Reply:A rose without a thorn is a dead rose...a life without trouble is a dead body. True.
Reply:You can't appreciate the good without knowing the bad.
Reply:Reads like an epitaph.
Reply:Well explained !!! Lif is a delicate balance in fact. We have to live with all we love and dont love. OK! Agreed
Reply:First of all, nice poem. I actually forwarded it to a friend. Thank you.
Second, as they say, a little suffering is good for the soul. Without pain, you can't appreciate pleasure or the absence of pain. No pain, no gain. Okay, enough of the cliches. You get the picture.
Reply:What's a Snickers bar without the peanuts?
What's an Almond Joy without the coconut?
What's a Big Mac without the ground beef?
Life is just a series of questions...
Reply:Wow, thats amazing. I've written on this frequently but rarely such an eloquent way of putting the question.
It captures the quote i wrote not long ago perfectly in prose form;
"When there is no peril in the fight, there is no glory in the triumph".
This poem is as yet the highlight of my day.
Thanks.
Reply:This is a species of the rose that do not have thorns. Too long to read the rest.
Reply:Troubles in life makes u more experienced and if u cry seeing a storm u r a coward . Face the world .
Reply:It's a life where we are all ants marching to the same tune.
Reply:when you pray for rain, wear your boots, there will be mud:)!!
Reply:What you say is true. You can't appreciate fully the good unless you know the bad. We were not put here to have it easy. We were put here to learn the lessons that God would have us learn.
Reply:Wow!
That is not a question! More of a statement!
Here you are on the Internet, I'll bet you have air conditioning, and you have plenty of food! You have a car, and a TV, maybe even cable. You should speak of hardships?
We all have hardships, but compared to the Majority of the word we have life easy! Get off you high horse. Damn I have a problem with people who are so wrapped up in themselves that they can't see the word!
Reply:Yes a rose is pretty but them thorns are ruff. This goes for life. Life is nice but, due to the fact that satan came into this world, it's tuff. So one day if we wait soon enough God will keep all the roses but take away the thorns.Case over with, Next.
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