Have i found a rose ?

from a private collection, may i share with you the reader.


The littlest rose grow's up


To touch your nose.


what a special touch for little rose.


The one day it was given sight,


to look into the heavens.


It saw, the nose.


The nose must be heaven to the rose.


The birds and bee"s do not smell of the fragrance,


given the rose.


No, It was made special for the nose.A.M.H.

Have i found a rose ?
You know, everything works for me but "the nose." That word just has comic connotations, and you can't get around it. Shame. Now, if had been "the lips" (doesn't work for a rose, but think of something appropriate) .... none of that, let's keep it clean ... it would be sensual and romantic.





IMHO
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Reply:cute. it reminds me of something from readers digest. Keep writing.
Reply:Yes, you have found a dead rose.