Blue rose poem,?

i asked my lover


where is my blue rose


he quietly says


where ever i go


i stare in curiosity


as he gazes into mine


he calls me his baby


i call him my light


as we walk to the doors


of his beauiful life


yet he never tells me


where he keeps his rose


and i laugh it off


even his white lies


make my heart bloom


one day cancer grows


on his beautiful heart


his life go's away


and so does mine too


his funeral came


and my broken heart flew


when i stared at his grave


the blue roses bloomed


i looked at my memories


that sprouted in the flowers


he never said a lie


for i was his blue rose


that followed him


his blue rose baby

Blue rose poem,?
Hello there... I like your poem. I'm a poet my self. I like the way you project your feelings trough it. I know it's not easy, Keep writing , your good. I'm sorry about your lost. It's almost ironic that something beautiful come from a painful experience. That's what make this art so incredible. Good luck to you. Best wishes from my heart ♥
Reply:nice poem... i was just listening to an italian song called 'una rosa blue' :-) yours is nice too!
Reply:Its a beautiful yet sad poem...I hope this didnt happen to you.. but definitely, it is very well done! I liked it.
Reply:Blue Rose,





I love your poem. the only thing I have a small problem with is the meter. I think it needs to flow smoother. the poem itself is fine. I reallly enjoyed it and you do have talent. Keep writing and I'll keep watching for your poems.
Reply:Umm... I would call this more of a story than a poem? And what is your question?
Reply:its soft n sweet .......makes me feel like i'm lying in my lovers arms while they are gone, like a memory